freestyle - lyric critique

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freestyle - lyric critique

by deonte stephenson
(chesapeake,virginia,usa)

im only 13 doing it big

check it yo i come from va lost and found in da struggle where niggas say stay safe and stay out of trouble beats are loyall da law im tryin to cuff u those move duffles move weight to have muscles i dug through where the voice of people open up for daddy kang and easy at da reaple the radio bearly put there meters on my record da aint see how da hood and heaven was connected sounds perjected cant show how to reflected leasons learned light r on 2 reflect it and everything i found real in life yo i kept da say lifes a teacher your goin 2 get tested where the niggas changed da kept saying dat nigga strange da couldnt se how my mind open some thangs ahead of my time and im cought up with the game makeing good money makeing paper makeing a change so whats good.

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Jun 21, 2009
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woah.
by: Michaela

that is amazing. i think your voice should be heard and everything. i am 13 myself. but still amazing.

Dec 08, 2009
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love yiou somng
by: marieta

That is well cool song your voice should be heard

Jan 01, 2010
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The song is HOT!!
by: Anonymous

I think you are good rapper and writer, can u give me some input on this song i wrote.

Songwriter poet

By James Cook

Title Gota,

Gota make it, Gota Hammer, Gota take it, gota face it, to many years wasted it, lock down in basement, gota see my vision The big picture, the scheme of the American dream gota, supply and demand the means, gota stack the cream, gota, smoke the green

Gota dish out the white, a dealers life, junkies delight all for a price, gota throw on the pin stripe , looking tight, gota comeback give back flashback, gota ho on the track making my dough back, Gota six with the 22s to match, gota player riding cool stepping out with gator shoes, gota stay away from the North Philly Blues,got know time too lose. Gota coped board and Market, SiQter gota park it, wall street gota stop it, gota bank roll gota stash it

Bonds making Double the profit, gota be like Roc fella bill gates, Moving at a fast pace,

Gota win the Race, Money chase, gota the city hostage ,got the blocks, captive ,like I was aterrorist from Turkish, blowing thing up on purpose, gota mind, gota stay on my grin, gota pack the gap, shooting off caps, drooping cats like a 85 catilck, gota get my respect,

Got these streets in check, paid and bless, ya gota believe that like life plays the game of chest, checkmate, Gota !! swith or Quick, cant lose ya space gota keep ya place,gota ya eyes on the hands the delt the cards that map out the plan. Focus Man!! Ya got one chance and only one leg to stand gota have faith like 100grand, layback on white sands gota Hit cant miss, Being deep shit, looking up at the six, Gota bottle of kris, with a chick I dismiss with a kiss,gota million advance , Gota sale, Can’t fall off the Shelf , Got My Boy out on bail,gota lawyer to bet the heat, Gota get back on the streets, got biggy beef gota sleep,rest in peace gota take out the snitch before the D.A get a itch gota hold are own to keep a king on his throne, gota live it up like Gotti and Capone 25 da life face like stone, Gota Judge shook, gota jury hooked Gota 5 star cook,gota sugar moma to handle the books, cause I’m old school crook, don”t get ya life took

Apr 28, 2010
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U suck
by: Kern

C'mon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anybody that listens rap could tell u that was Common's verse from T.I's Goodlife.

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