Forgotten Dreams - Lyrics Critique

by Beth
(New Zealand)

Every storm has lightning every rainfall has a dark cloud every rainbow has a pot of gold colours colliding to the end follow the path of the rainbow but i cant get off the ground

Forgotten dreams lay before me
cause here I am frozen as ice
reach my hand out but not ready to fight
forgotten dreams stopping me
give me the strength I need to stand on my own two feet
Cause here I am frozen as ice reach my hand out but not ready to fight
forgotten dreams lay before me

The touch of cold on the inside got a feeling i dont know but it aint inside my heart beats a million miles away . . .

(and I cant remember the rest cause i a year 9 and at school and dont have the peice of paper with the lyrics on it lol)