Forgetting to breathe - lyrics critique[:

by kelsey
(WISCONSIN[:)

FORGETTING TO BREATHE

VERSE ONE:
I sit here with this smile
I’ve had on all day
Thinking of the words
That I really want to say
Don’t know what it is
Don’t know how it got here
All I know is that
Every time I see I you
I get this crazy feeling (Oh!)

CHORUS:
I keep forgetting to breathe
When im around you
You just take it away
All I can do is trip
When im around you
(Kuz) You just keep making fall
fall, oh, fall, for you

VERSE TWO:
I lay here with the feeling
Creeping up in me
Butterflies surround us
Only if you could see
Don’t know what I did
Don’t know how it goes
All I know is that
Every day I see you
I get this crazy feeling (Oh!)

(Chorus)

BRIDGE:
Open your eyes
Baby, please
Im practically on my knees
Oh, yeah
You and I…
Me and you…
Imagine what
The world would do…

If you held me close
And never let go
Ah-yeah-e-yeah!

(chorus first two lines-slow, then back to normal speed for rest)