Fly - Lyrics Critique

by Catrionaa
(Nottingham)

I Wrote This Song When My Ex-Boyfriend Broke Up With Me And I Knew I Needed To Get Over Him. Thankfully I Now Am (: Tell Me What You Think.

Chorus
Your Can't Hold Onto Something,
That's Trying To Fly Away From You,
So Spread Out Your Wings,
With A Smile On Your Face,
And Fly In The Other Direction,
'Cause One Day You'll Meet An Eagle,
Willing To take You Higher.

Verse 1
Don't Be Afraid To Fly On Your Own,
It's The Only Way To Achieve Your Goals,
Sour Higher And Higher Through The Clouds,
Not Thinking About Who Let You Down,
Sing Out Your Song, Dance Among Snowflakes,
Roads In The Sky, But You'll Never Touch The Brakes,
Life's Like A Letter, It Can Be Re-Written,
So Search For The Eagle, While The Sun's Risen.

Chorus

Verse 2
Though It May Feel Like The World Has Ended,
The Love We Had Was Never Splendid,
You've Been Hurt So It's Time To Move On,
With Your Head Held High, Just Like A Swan,
Bear the Weight Placed Upon Your Shoulders,
As If The Bag's Not Full Of Boudlers,
Love's Like A Hurricane, But You'll Make It Through,
Once On The Other Side You'll Be Happy Too.

Chorus

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