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Five Reasons To Fall Apart - Lyrics

by Areebah
(Karachi)

Not so very long ago

I’d count your footsteps when you’d go

And sculpt my heart to fit your palm

Welcome you back with open arms



But times have changed, and u have changed

My source of strength is very strange

I’ll always miss what I can’t find

I’m struggling to leave you behind



I killed the person you passed by

I learnt to hide it when I cry

From broken shards I built a life

When once again I said goodbye

The misery a friend can bring

I hope you never feel this sting

I don’t want any sympathy

I’m living with an altered me



I thought you’d get under my skin

You used to be my medicine

We could have healed if you had stayed

Still you forsook a promise made



So times have changed, and I have changed

This irony is very strange

You’re gone for good you’re on my mind

I’m struggling to leave you behind



I killed the person you passed by

Who told you I’m yours to defy?

And though I fear how I will feel

I’ll face you I will meet your eye

I fought my pride I felt your hurt

I hung onto a whispered word

I’m smiling at your apathy

I’m living with an altered me



I walked this tunnel saw no light

My love for you, a futile fight

Tomorrow we’ll be strangers yet

Today deep down you know who’s right



And I don’t need to ask you why

The end, oh yeah its time to fly

I know that twinge of regret but

I can’t forgive you if I try

With five reasons to fall apart

I’d still have gone back to the start

Don’t turn this way, don’t try to see

I’m living with an altered me




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Oct 16, 2009
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awesome
by: Anonymous

that was amazing keep up the good work. i wish i could write something like that

Oct 28, 2009
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nice
by: Anonymous

I LIKE !!! good vocabulary keep on

Nov 20, 2009
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good Job
by: Anonymous

wow i love that, it is so cool, although i am only 12 years old i still think that is a good song

Jan 02, 2010
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(:
by: Anonymous

love it!!!!

May 10, 2010
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by: writer

the is FOR REAL good! it was a lil shaky in the after the 1st chorus and verse cuz i thought it was all gona sound the same. but the lyrics really work and get a lot stronger after that. great job on the song, it shud b professionally recognized.

Dec 07, 2011
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Great lyrics!
by: Anonymous

I really like this!! Sometimes you're couplets don't make sense together so work on writing couplets that are related for the most part. But other than that it was great!

Jan 25, 2012
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FIVE reasons to enjoy! NEW
by: Nyx Echoes

1:words 2:feeling 3:figurative language 4:I like sensationalism like 'killed', 5: daughtry-esque...hope u like daughtry...

I love it! I think it'd be a really good acoustic song.
And I agree with whoever wrote before me, you have really good grammar, I always have trouble coming up with the right verbs and not repeating things like alive, thrive, all that crap.
But anyway, good job!
If I were you, i would take out a verse or two in that first chourus, but that might be fine if it had music to it...

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