Feel Fine lyrics critique- rock song

by T.a.C
(California)

I mostly write rap songs, and that is mostly all i listen to, but i figured id give it a try writing rock songs. i wrote a few and i want some feedback, to see if they are any good. so if anyone can gimme some comments about this i greatly appreciate it


verse

You been long gone, you have gone away
You dont want to talk cuz you got nothin to say
You been around just not too close
Your feet miss the ground cuz your a ghost

You never believed in me i wouldnt have either
You roll in a beamer while I'm in a beater
You been watchin me, I can't see you
You stay followin me, you know what i do

chorus

It'd be a lie to say i dont need you
It'd be a lie to say i mistreat you
It'd be a lie to find when i open my eyes
and dont see you that i feel fine

verse

You been gone a year, it feels like a week
You have no clue about the havoc you wreak
When the chips are down, its best to leave the table
I'd get over you if only i were able

chorus

It'd be a lie to say i dont need you
It'd be a lie to say i mistreat you
It'd be a lie to fin when i open my eyes
and dont see you that i feel fine

Bridge

When the phone rings.. i ask if its you
the doorbell rings.. i look for you
when the chips are down.. i stay there and lose
when theres nothing to be found.. i know its you

chorus

It'd be a lie to say i dont need you
It'd be a lie to say i mistreat you
It'd be a lie to find when i open my eyes
ad dont see you that i feel fine.