Father's Day Lyrics Critique

by Blair

Verse 1: I’m not afraid of living
You changed me so I could do that
From when I was a baby
To who I am now
You stood and reminded me
I was still just a baby

Verse 2: Years have past
Memories in my hand
Angered over words I spoke
But that one time
That one-day
I could nothing
From being separated
I knew myself
It was so tragic
You’ll never get that back
Now I feel high
While you stay low
Me you don't know
You'll have to live with that

Bridge: To deny actions
Is to forget your-self
Remember the time
But you say you don’t
Filthy pressure grew
And then I didn’t care
You have a lot
I have nothing you taught me

Chorus: Stand drink up to father’s day
Celebrate this day
To your father’s day
Looking at you was my first mistake
You were my first mistake
You were my only mistake

Bridge: To deny actions
Is to forget your-self
Remember the time
But you say you don’t
You have a lot
I have nothing you taught me (3x)