Eyes Wide Open (One of the first sings I wrote) - Lyrics Critique

by Kristyn
(WV)

This is one of the first songs I ever wrote, so It's not the best, but I'm still looking for any kind of suggestions. The beat is kinda medium. It is a country song!!!!

Eyes Wide Open

If I only could’ve seen
What you turned out to be
I wouldn’t have fallen as hard
But it was up to my heart
Oh not me

Oh, oh not me

All that I seem to want
You seem to like to flaunt
Cause it’s you, all you
Yeah, yeah

I got my
Eyes wide open
But my mind is closed
Yeah you seem to know
How I feel
Oh my eyes are wide open
But my heart remains frozen
And with my eyes wide open
What I see is real

I don’t really care
Or want to share
What I feel inside
You’ve opened my eyes
Oh

Oh I got my
Eyes wide open
But my mind is closed
Yeah you seem to know
How I feel
Oh my eyes are wide open
But my heart remains frozen
And with my eyes wide open
What I see is real

Oh, oh, oh

You can try as hard as you can
But I’ll never fall for your plan
To lure me in
Oh you can try as hard as you an
It just proves you’re a pathetic man
Oh a man

I got my
Eyes wide open
But my mind is closed
Yeah you seem to know
How I feel
Oh my eyes are wide open
But my heart remains frozen
And with my eyes wide open
What I see is real

Yeah what I see is the real deal

Oh eyes wide open