Eyes to the sky---Rock/Pop lyrics critique

by Kyle
(Chico, Ca)

She said while Im stuck rollin with these pretty eyes
Im gonna run around and hang with all those fancy guys
got no time for trash like you
just sitting on your porch and singing the blues

Well I cant lie baby cause I miss your touch
but if you're gonna move on it dont a bother me much
cause there's a hundred pretty faces right outside my door
and by the time you move on there'll be a hundred more

If you want it all
Then go get it all
Cant say ill be the one to give it to you
But ill never be the one to stop you no

Jump into the ocean when I dont know how to swim
You can throw me a line but you cant reel me in
And for a while I was sinking but no never again
Cause there's nothing out there that I cant find from within

And baby, baby, baby, I aint lying when i tell ya
That we're living in a world of sin
Fat cats get fatter like nothing ever mattered
but my wallets sure feelin thin
But I aint too worried no I aint in no hurry
ya I take it with a grain of salt
Cause if the ocean swells up and steals away your home
stop crying cause it aint your fault

If you want it all
then go get it all
If it makes you happy then hold onto it
But Im trying, trying to keep out of it

Cause im just rolling with the devil beside me
Just drinking and smoking barely staying alive see
Cause i'd rather live a life I know that you despise
than please you sweet baby by living a lie

Cause i'll never be the one to drive your lavish cars
Or pay for you to drink at those extravagant bars
but if you lay here real close I'll play you my guitar
and if you close your eyes baby I can show you the stars

If you want it all
then go get it all
cant say ill be the one to give it to you
But i'll never be the one to stop you no
If you want it all
then go get it all
If it makes you happy then hold on to it
But Im trying, trying to keep out of it