Experience gain through dad - Lyrics Critique

by samuel adjei
(Ghana)

Experience gain through dad
(a talk)
First of all thanks to dad for bringin me in to this world life is a struggle 3x
I do this for the world to all parents singles mothers and fathers take this

Verse 1
When I stan here lookin back in the days I used to have it hard I can predict I got a brighter future a head my head
(yes) cus life was so tuff and so ugly my life full of strugglin and hustlrin cuz home
Was so ful of misery and so borin and dad too confusion but I was having ambition my decision always rolls me into new vision (that?s right) My dad never had penny yet see him bringin home somethin to cook in the kitchen
Even though I was left uncared deep down cus lack of dough I promised my self and never fall off truck Strugglin in every plans I made to achieved strugglin in every place I step in Even though I was a drop out 18 years Heeeyyy I know how to strugglin for ma own set traps to trap my dough I know how to achieved that goal now I know how to strugglin to care for my unborn seeding (my family) now

(chorus)
Thanks to the experience I gain through dad if there should be any greatest girth on earth I give it up to my dad for my mon am speechless she is my pretty queen life goes on 2x
(I now understand life better)
Cus i understand selling even ice water by the road side I can built a mansion and if I dream big I can achieved extra more done mr. Oba ma (that?s right)
(chorus)
Thanks to the experience I gain through my dad if there should be any greatest girth on earth I give it up to my dad for my mon am speechless she is my pretty queen life goes on
Thanks to the true experience I gain through my dad if there should be any greatest girth on earth I give it up to my dad for my mon am speechless she is my pretty queen life goes on (yes) (I now understand life better)

Verse 2
A talk
Dear dad you were never therefore for me but you are appreciated for bringin me into this universe now I know bit about how god operates kick out on


the street un carable is not the end of life if I determine I can overcome my tragedy the struggle and husltlin on the street was an experience of my life to the next level for mon she is in heart secretly cus that is where all my love is hidden and I afraid of war in my live in all that i dooooooo cus is an experience to a high lever
dad and mon you are appreciated this is how far I can show my true love better

(chorus)
Thanks to the experience I gain through my dad if there should be any greatest girth on earth I give it up to my dad for my mon am speechless she is my pretty queen life goes on
Thanks to the true experience I gain through my dad if there should be any greatest girth on earth I give it up to my dad for my mon am speechless she is my pretty queen life goes on (yes) (I now understand life better)

Verse 3)
Dear fathers who root was better how can we thank you you understand education better so you wanted the best for us forever from elementarily to high school from high to trainin collage now from better job to a brighter future heeeeey (that?s deddy) (I wish I had the same) but my life was different
And also how can we thank you dad for all the inspiration words you always tells us in times of lost hopein trouble and broken hearts (try, a lil more, you can make it) realllly inspires u?..s alot (yes How can we understand the strugglin you struggle for us and the dough you spent on us just for the best for us and the experience you gave us through education ( daddy you are appriciated)

(Chorus)

Thanks to the expirence I gain from my dad if there should be any greatest girth on earth I give it up to my dad for my mon am speechless she is my pretty queen life goes on
Thanks to the true experience I gain from my dad (yes)
(I now understand life better)
My dad and mom is my greatest wealth in this world no words can be used to express their love for us in this world you pass through a lot of strugglin to raise us in this world (you are appriciated)
live goes on

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