Evolution Lyrics Critique- Christian Alternative Song

by Curtis Spain
(Columbus, Ohio)

Thanks in advance for taking a look at my song. Your opinion is very much appreciated! If you want to hear a demo of this song I recorded on GarageBand, follow this link: www.reverbnation.com/thecyclesmusic. It is not intended to be a finished product, but it will give you an idea of how the song goes. Thanks again!

In my darkest hour I trust in You
You pick me up when I feel abused
And when I can count on no one I can in You
You are the Way, the Life, the Truth

You are everything I need
You helped me see what i could be
Looking back at what I used to be
I think it's safe to say
God, You saved me

My eyes are weak, I cannot sleep
I feel my whole life slipping away
My clothes are torn my body's sore
And I've got nowhere else to turn

You are everything I need
You helped me see what i could be
Looking back at what I used to be
I think it's safe to say
God, You saved me

God, You saved me
You're my shelter from the storm
And everything I am
Is all because You are
I wonder where I'd be
If it wasn't for your grace
God, You saved me