Everytime. Pop Song. Lyrics Review

by maryf

This is a really rough draft, it's just my first thoughts, but when I tried improving it, I froze up on ideas. Please help if you have ideas.

Walking down the street in the pouring rain
The people passing by ask if we are insane
We're just a couple of teenagers having some fun
What's the matter with a few drops of water when it's all said and done?

Is this how you fall into this thing that they call love?
Playing tag in public parks, never having enough
Going down a roller coaster, holding on to you tight
Staying up late watching movies till all hours of the night.

Chorus: Everytime you look at me I wonder how much you can see
Can you see it in my eyes or have I on to good a disguise?
You and me just have to be, one and one oh don't you see?


What makes me feel this way I've never felt before.
A thrill runs up and down my spine when you knock on the door
Maybe I have fallen in love with you
And I'd give anything to know if you felt that way, too