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Ever - (Lyrics for Critique)

by Katy
(Prince George)

You said I wasn't good enough
I'd never be the same
You shook your head and laughed at me
Put your mom to shame
Left me sitting in the dirt
With nothing but my name
And as you laughed and walked away
Was then I called your name

Et tu Brute
What have I done to you
To make you hate, deny my name, my friend

Got back up on both my feet
And then I made my name
Spent all my time away from you
To redirect the pain
And now you cannot laugh at me
Because I'm not the same
Now who's the one with all the earth
And you who calls my name

Et tu Brute, what have I done to you
To make you hate, despise my my name, my friend

I'll never be, the way that you want me to be
But now you'll realize, I'm not the same
I'm so much more, than you will ever be
I've made a name, the world will see
The way I've changed

Ya said I wasn't good enough,
I'd never be the same
Shook your head and laughed at me,
put your mom to shame
But now you cannot laugh at me
because I'm not the same
Now who's the one with all the earth
and you who calls my name

et tu brute, what have I done to you
TO make you hate, deny my name, my friend

Et tu Brute, you had to let me go
You laughed at me and pushed away your friend

Et tu Brute, now I do not know you
Let me go, I'm not the same old friend










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Nov 11, 2008
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love your song!!
by: Anonymous

A couple of the lines didn't make sense to me, but that didn't really matter because that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nov 22, 2008
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Less rhymes, please....
by: Jake

Try not to make everything rhyme with "name", it becomes boring. Get some other words in there and the song will become more interesting, trust me!!! Check out my song, "Time" and tell me what you think!!!

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