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ended by jess country song

by jess
(pa)

i wish i knew what to say
i hope we can get past hey
words were gone from me today
it all ended after i walked away
we had a friendship that never should have ended
we had a love we should've defended
but i didnt like the people u befriended
oh, but we never shouldve ended
we laughed and talked a lot
i was the flower and ur arms were the pot
the way u looked at me made me feel hot
but i wont lie and say we never fought
we had a friendship that never shouldve ended
we had a love we shouldve defended
but i didnt like the people u befriended
oh, but we never shouldve ended
sometimes i cry when i think of u
my friends say ill make it through
oh i really hope i do
cause i dont wanna keep feeling blue
we had a friendship that never shouldve ended
we had a love we shouldve defended
but i didnt like the people u befriended
oh but we never shouldve ended




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ended by jess country song

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Sep 29, 2008
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by: Anonymous

love it!

Oct 25, 2008
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WOW!
by: AMBER

THIS IS AWESOME.
YOUR AMAZING.REALLY!

Nov 22, 2008
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Too many rhymes!!!
by: Jake

I can tell you like to rhyme, and many people do!!! Let me tell you though, there are more interesting ways to do it. What you are doing is rhyming every 4 lines together, which will get old. Try every other line, or something like that. You can make this better, and more interesting, if you don't rhyme the same way every time. Check out my song, "Time" and tell me what you think. In my song there are a lot of rhymes, but it just worked for this one. Cheers!!

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