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Eatin Alive - Lyric Review

by Haivian
(Bkln,New York)

A lot of hatin’ cause ya never had the feeling I get
when I am all ready and set
to do what I gotta do just to reach success
or get eatin’ alive if I don't give it a try.
How am I Supposed to find my light
in this abyss and in the dark?
Everything I write, is a work of art.
I won’t let the doubts get the best of me
when I know this is something I can achieve.

Verse#1
Another failed attempt trying to make it in the industry,
Just trying to make something out in the street.
Ya don't know how it feels trying to become an MC,
Struggling to mix happiness with misery.
Everyday yo its very hard for me,
knowing I’m the one this world is gonna eat.
The feel of Being Beaten,
hard to get on my feet;
It's like trying to climb a mountain way to steep.
I’m gonna die trying, my words to speak.
With all the green in my hand, I still won’t feel complete.
Some days I feel like quitting, but I just can’t quit.
I’d be throwing away everything i've written,that to me long to think
Everybody is a critic of what I do.
Everybody doesn't get to live it, but I hope to




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Aug 21, 2009
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not too bad
by: Lonnie

I think you only need to go back and polish it awhile and I think it would shine

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