"Easy Does It" Lyric Critique - Rock/Country/Folk Song

by Barry Clinton
(Warminster PA )

Hello All,

Wanna be lyricist here with no musical ability, just want to know if the attached lyric is music worthy?
Please advise, thanks much!

“Easy Does It”

Easy enough to see by the look in your eyes,
don’t need Cupid‘s arrow falling from the skies,
to recognize that gaze yea carry for another,
but can’t help feeling your heart’s being unwise.

Easy to fly with both feet off the ground,
seemingly soaring at the speed of sound,
spinning around in his welcome arms,
pledging promises so pure ‘n profound.

But easy does it,
with all the come ‘n go,
just don’t wanna be the one,
the one telling yea I told yea so,
told yea so,
told yea so,
told yea so,
yeah telling yea I told yea so again.

Easy on the eyes when blinded by love,
pressing on when push comes to shove,
hand in glove fingers reaching out grasping,
with a death grip near impossible to let go of.

Easy does it when falling so damn hard,
just a drooling ‘n a dropping your guard,
been so scarred beyond repair before,
haven’t it in me to send another sympathy card.

But easy does it,
with all this come ‘n go,
just don’t wanna be the one,
the one telling yea I told yea so,
told yea so,
told yea so,
told yea so,
yeah telling yea I told yea so again.

BRC © Dec/03