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Driving Me Crazy - Lyrics Critique

by Libby
(Oneonta, New York)

So I called you today to talk things out.
I'm, sick of playing all of these games.
You didn't answer your cell so it rang right through
and I started to give up hope but then i stopped and thought

CHORUS:
I've had a crush on you for(EVERRRR...)
Went crazy when you looked me in the eyes.
For some reason i thought you may be the one
But boy was I wrong..I think because
you took me completely by suprise
You started to ignore me even at sight
I thought you'd tell me it outwright
That I wasn't the one...
That you were crushing on.

I went through your line at the market.
Made it clear that we needed to talk. Texted you telling you how i felt, which wasn't the thing to do, because you said "I'm sorry but i can't let that happen."

CHORUS:

But what i don't understand is why when i demanded that if you didn't like me couldn't you say so and instead...You were speechless, textless, I underestimated you(UU). You were older I was younger but I was one to speak up. It's a felony I know but I'm not looking to hook up. I am clear enough but your so freaking difficult why can't you just tell me the truth. That your not crushing on me.

CHORUS:

It is not a felony to tell the truth. It's only a felony between the ages of dating, but we aren't gonna go there. Don't just jump to conclusions. Why can't you comprehend what I'm trying to tell you?

CHORUS

Should I have hope? You said to let it go but just answer me and say ..I'm not the one for you? I am the one for you. Just tell me the truth and don't hide it away because that will drive me crazy. Drive me crazy (X4)

It will only acerbate it...




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Driving Me Crazy - Lyrics Critique

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Nov 21, 2010
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by: Anonymous

good job!

Dec 02, 2010
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by: Anonymous

This song is so surfaced. There's a little flow but u could use more creative lauguage to bring more emotion and feeling (lol guess that's the same thing) the message believe me is totally clear but are u telling us or showing us even if it's a song

Dec 09, 2010
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good!
by: Anonymous

I really like the lyrics, it wouldn't be that difficult to put music with it.
The lyrics are not complicated and very understandable.

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