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Dream lyrics Critique - RnB/ soul

by Rashelle
(NSW)

I had that dream again
The one with you and me
The one where i had found you
And you were in my reach

Yours arms open wide
Standing in the distance
My lifes been one big ride
Just like a rollercoaster
Its had its ups and downs
The day i'll finally find you
And you will be around

The loneliness within
The loneliness i felt
Its just my bad luck
It was the hand that i was dealt

I once was lost,empty and afraid
Never really knew
If this day would come
the day i'd finally find you
The day i'd get up and run

Towards your missing arms
The ones that were never there
The ones that i've been longing for
The hugs we could have shared

The loneliness within
The loneliness i felt
Its just my bad luck
It was the hand that i was dealt

There was an empty spot inside
Deep within my heart
And to see you there infront of me
It could have torn me apart

I thought you'd never come
why did you leave me?
When i was only young
You don't have to explain
You are here now
And now that i'm here with you
Forever will you be around?

Now is all i care about
Not whats in the past
I hope this dream will never end
Cos i have found you at last

when this dream does end
And you'll no longer be here
You'll be waiting in my next dream
And i'll be shedding tears

Im looking forward to seeing you
Again tomorrow night
And i'll be off dreaming away
With you within my sight.

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