"dream" - lyric critique

by nathaniel ortiz
(Lynn,Massachusetts)

VERSE:1
There's a dream in my mind
but will it come true
will i ever achieve it
there's a voice in my head
telling me you cant do it
but what i say is

CHORUS
If i believe in myself
I know i can do it
When i look within myself
I'll achieve all my dreams
Nothings getting in my way
of my dreams

VERSE:2
There may be mountains
in my way
But no im not giving up
I got to stay strong
And keep my faith
And if i keep falling down
What i say is

CHORUS
If i believe in myself
I know i can do it
When i look within myself
I'll achieve all my dreams
Nothings getting in my way
of my dreams