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Dont know a name yet . some one could help thoo. (lyric review)

by emily
(rugeley)

What do think of this? needs a name have not got one yet.


verse 1
what if it was dream, would i believe it or would i disagree,
ive got this feeling that builds upside,
i dont want this dream to last longer,
because it makes me cry inside.

chorus

When i feel like this i get lost inside,
when i feel like this i just wana hide,
it feels like forever, just to think its nearly been a year,
ive just gotta say goodbye one more time,


verse 2
Everything changing, im getting wiser but your not here,
to see whats is happening,
what if you was here would it be the same,
or would it be so different, that i cant explain.


chorus

When i feel like this i get lost inside,
when i feel like this i just wana hide,
it feels like forever, just to think its nearly been a year,
ive just gotta say goodbye one more time,



All i want to do is say goodbye one more time,
cos it hurts me so bad,
to know that im not even gona hear your voice again.
Please just one last time.


please..




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Dont know a name yet . some one could help thoo. (lyric review)

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Feb 22, 2009
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hi
by: talitha

I loved it and you were looking 4 a name I would have called it 'feels like forever' I hope that helps you ( i have a song on this page put myself in motion you can check if you want)

Sep 09, 2009
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GOT A NAME 4 U
by: NATALIE

LIKE IT ALOT. I'D CALL IT 'ONE MORE TIME' PLEASE CHECK OUT MY LYRICS. 'CAN'T FIGHT THIS FIGHT'

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