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Don't Crank My Tractor Country Lyric Critique

by CHARLIE
(ALABAMA)


Don’t crank my tractor,

He was a man of few words
He had farmed near all his life
just last year his ex- best friend
Ran off with his wife
So when that young gal came on to him
He just turned his head
Then He looked her in the eyes
And this is what he said

Don’t crank my tractor
If you don’t intend to plow
You may think that I’m harmless
But I ain’t forgotten how
I don’t know how to play the game
That you are playing now
Don’t crank my tractor
If you ain’t gonna plow

There was nothing fake about him
he got right to the point
Excuse me mam, he said
I may sound a little blunt
If you just want to play a game
Go find someone else right now
Don’t crank my tractor
If you don’t want to plow

Don’t crank my tractor
If you don’t intend to plow
You may think that I’m harmless
But I ain’t forgotten how
I don’t know how to play the game
Like you’re doing now
Don’t crank my tractor
If you ain’t gonna plow



He was a man of few words
He had farmed near all his life
just last year his ex- best friend
Ran off with his wife
So when that young gal came on to him
He just turned his head
Then He looked her in the eyes
And this is what he said

Don’t crank my tractor
If you don’t intend to plow
You may think that I’m harmless
But I ain’t forgotten how
I don’t know how to play the game
That you are playing now
Don’t crank my tractor
If you ain’t gonna plow

There was nothing fake about him
he got right to the point
Excuse me mam, he said
I may sound a little blunt
If you just want to play a game
Go find someone else right now
Don’t crank my tractor
If you don’t want to plow

Don’t crank my tractor
If you don’t intend to plow
You may think that I’m harmless
But I ain’t forgotten how
I don’t know how to play the game
Like you’re doing now
Don’t crank my tractor
If you ain’t gonna plow




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Don't Crank My Tractor Country Lyric Critique

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Mar 07, 2009
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Great Idea
by: Danny

Charlie,

Great song idea! I've read some of your other songs on this site and I am impressed.I am a songwriter out of ohio. I write lyric and music.
If you are looking for someone to write music for this song I would be interested.You can contact me at dannytsongs@gmail.com.

Much Success,
Danny


Aug 22, 2009
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I don't know
by: Lonnie

I don't know if it makes it all fit with the music or not but I was wondering why you have this twice

He was a man of few words
He had farmed near all his life
just last year his ex- best friend
Ran off with his wife
So when that young gal came on to him
He just turned his head
Then He looked her in the eyes
And this is what he said

I'm sure as good a writer you are you have a reason for it, but I think I would had left it out. Other than that I loved it. Keep it up--Lonnie


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