Do you remember lyrics critique

by kaid
(pierre sd)

hey this is my first song so I hope ya all like it


Do you remember the first time we met
i didn't know you nor would i forget
I thought that i should start out slow
ask for a movie night and go to the show

do you remember walking down that hallway
we start asking how was your day
and as i looked in to your eyes
i could tell that you knew my surprise

oooo your my Cinderella
and im your prince charming
talking about our fairy tail stories
and hoping in the end theirs you and me

do you remember the first time we danced
it all started with one simple glance
the DJ put on our favorite song
just so that everyone could sing along

oooo your my Cinderella
and im your prince charming
talking about our fairy tail stories
and hoping in the end theirs you and me

Bridge: while were dancing
while we're holding each other so tight
under the starlight
while were singing trying to remember
what all started this song

oooo your my Cinderella
and im your prince charming
talking about our fairy tail stories
and hoping in the end theirs you and me
(repeat and fad out)