Dissapointment lyrics critique

by A. Price
(City)

ok well dis is actually a poem i wrote last year but someone said it myt make a good song. Not so sure so just wanting some feedback bout what u think =] if i could edit or smthng. everything muchly appriceated !!

Dissapointment
is a lonely little boy
waiting in the gutter
playing with tiny
stones
in his hands
while his eyes glance
down the road.

dissapointment
is a lonely little boy
walking down the street
staring at his scrapping shoes
while the world stops spinning
to let go of him.