Devil Girl Lyrics Critique, Pop/Metal

by Rune
(Modesto, Ca)

I'm still not 100% sure about this song so any input will help.

Verse 1
You look at me that way I know what you think
I've been a Bad bad boy, I deserve a spanking

You hold me in your arms and carress me with your lips
You hypnotise my mind by the way you shake your hips

Chorus
You put a spell on me
There's no denying
You're more than I deserve and you're everything I need
I can not hide it
Mesmorized by what you said
Caught up in the rhythem making poetry in bed
You're my Devil Girl

Verse 2
I wanna wrap my arms around your sexy little body
Enjoy you like a sweet sweet cherry dipped in honey

Nothing can compare to the smell of your perfume
As we're crashing through the door and into my room

repeat chorus