Death Valley- Rock Lyrics Critique

by James

Verse 1
We sat at the bar laughing as we drank our beer
Just loving life before we went to war
We heard the news as the day drew near
Were going the no mans land of Kongreal Valley

Verse 2
The mortars and bullets fell like rain
We stayed down as we fired away
Three bullets ripped through my leg
I fell down in a world of pain

The thunder of guns rang through the valley
As the sounds of war rang in my head
With a burst of a gun my best friend fell
A bullet in his chest, I found him dead

Verse 3
Now I sit at home with these scars
My bronze star is in a box on the wall
I went to visit my friend’s grave
This horror is too real, and so is my pain

This war is all too real

Pre Chorus
They flew us away to Afghanistan
We knew we might never come home
Our blood will be spilled
Down here in this hard land

Chorus
We’re here to fight the Taliban
Sitting here in no man’s land
We fight them night and day
And I’m never comin’ home