critique yesterday's fear lyrics - rock song

by Roos
(Netherlands)

Hi, my name is Roos, i live in the netherlands. I play guitar acoustic & electric and i write my own lyrics. Hope you will leave comments or give critique =)

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Yesterday’s fear

Quietly she hopes it’s all a joke
but quietly she lets go all her hope
quietly she hopes the feelings miss
but quietly she feels the pain exist

-chorus-
it happened so fast you can’t exhale
breathing in and out
you seem to fail
it happened so fast you can’t turn away
searching for some help
you seem to fail

and quietly she hopes it’s all a dream
a nightmare, just worse than it seems
quietly she hopes she can run
quietly she turns towards the sun

-chorus-
it happened so fast you can’t exhale
breathing in and out
you seem to fail
it happened so fast you can’t turn away
searching for some help
you seem to fail

face to face with her destiny
seeing everything
she ought to be
standing there
nothing left to say
she takes a last look
and runs away

quietly it screams inside her head
but secretly she knows the past is dead
quietly she runs from her hope
finally it’s time to let go