Courtneys lyrics feedback - country/pop

by Courtney
(Byron Center, Michigan, USA)

this song is about my best friend whos dad left when she was 4 years old. she could never get over why. she got into drugs, sex, and a lot of bad things. then she met her boyfriend and he turned her life around. her story inspired me so much i had to write it down and it turned into a song. enjoy.

Little misfit
by: Courtney Crisp

she was just thirteen
never had a chance
young mama, dead beat dad
same old song and dance
she was so sad...
she turned to her friends for love and support
she slit her wrist, had sex
and did drugs of all sorts she was so bad...

(chorus)
little misfit
dont know where her daddy is
little misfit
that poor lonely girl
doesnt have a friend in the world
she is so bad, she is so sad
little misfit

she dreamt of lov
but never found
as soon as she stood up she
was pushed back down
her friends made fun
wheres her moment in the sun?
she was so sad, she was so bad

(chorus)

she met a boy
and there she found
nice and good lookin'
with both feet on the ground
she lookind in his eyes
and got a surprize

(chorus)

she was just 13
never had a chance
'till he came along
same old song and dance
she was fallin' in love...

little misfit
dont care where her daddy is
little misfit
she just wants to love him
he turned around her world
she is so glad, she is not sad
because she has him