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Country Song - Lyrics-critique

by Becky Big Canoe
(north of Toronto)

Just A Country Song by Becky Big Canoe

I want to be a writer of country songs to help me ease my pain
And tho it may hurt like hell, they say no pain, no gain
What can I fall back on, that will ease this hurting way
Since I said goodbye to you on that sad, sad day

Cuz we both knew it had to be that way
That we couldn't carry on
That the love we thought we had
Was just a country song

A country song can say so much, it can really say a lot
It talks of all that could have been and all that is not
We tried our best to beat the odds and still it seems we lost
And only our battered hearts will really know the cost

But we both knew it had to be that way
That we couldn't carry on
That the love we thought we had
Was just a country song

And like a love that's beaten down and a country song that's true
We both know that you'll love me and I'll always love you
Maybe it's just the times or the burdens that we bear
Like a country song it's something we'll always know we shared

And we both knew it had to be this way
That we couldn't carry on
Too many hurts we can't get past
Just like a country song

And just like Dolly sang, in a song I love so true
I will always, always love you
And it's just the way life is sometimes
We end up feeling blue because

We both knew it had to be this way
That we couldn't carry on
And the love we thought was forever
Was just a country song

And just like a country song
Even the good ones don't last forever (spoken)




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Country Song - Lyrics-critique

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Dec 01, 2008
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I love the premise of compairing love to a song
by: Charlie

Becky I'm no pro But i really liked you lyrics, very good job. I love the images you present. I played with your chorus a bit and this is what i came up with .

But we both knew it would end like this
and we couldn't carry on
The love we shared was beyond repair
we were living a country song

I was told once by a writer in nashville that a song is never finished it is open to interpertation by every one who reads it sings it records it. Write from your heart your life your experiences. kleep writing

Dec 01, 2008
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thank you for the feedback
by: Becky BC

Thank you so much Charlie. Having read your lyrics I definitely give respect to what you say. And I did like those revisions you made to the chorus. This is the "one-off" take of the song but the way it happened so quickly got me so excited about seeing if it had any merit. So, I do appreciate your feedback, hopefully I'll have a couple more up soon for you to check out. I'm finding I'm coming out with more traditional heart-break almost drinking songs...lol. Look forward to more sharing and critiquing with you.

Aug 16, 2009
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Great Ideal
by: Lonnie

I think you aced this one.

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