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Corinne Lyrics Critique - What Would Happen? - Love pop song

by Corinne

What Would Happen?

INTRO:
I'm not sure, how I want
To feel, about you,
And I don't want, them to know
Of the pain, you didn't see you put me through

VS 1:
I want you, here with me
Cuz I know, you'll treat me right
I still, can't believe
that you are friends, with someone like me...

And somedays, that go by
I swear to god, I'm gonna cry
I need you here, here with me
And I wish, you would see..

Chorus:
What could happen if we held our gaze?
What could happen if we don't wait?
What would happen if we never let go?
(& here's what would happen..)
I know we'd have our first kiss
and i'm sure we'd fall in love
I can guarantee you this is our fate
And I can't stop hopin', believin', dreamin',
Cuz I believe I won..

VS 2:
And I know, we're far apart
And they know, I miss your eyes,
I wonder if, you think of me
Now they see, right through my lies

Cuz they know, you're on my mind
And I think, about you all the time
You are, one of the
best things that's happened to me


Bridge:
Everyday, that goes by
I think about, you all the time
And even though, you're not here
I pretend, everyday
I'm livin' life, perfectly
And sometimes, I break down...
But I do it all for you........

Chorus X2




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Corinne Lyrics Critique - What Would Happen? - Love pop song

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Apr 29, 2009
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good song
by: nathaniel ortiz

wow i love your song its really good you should keep on writing songs

Aug 21, 2009
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This is really good
by: Lonnie

I think you need to polish it. I think it would be a great song

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