"Coming Home- lyrics critique"

by Payton
(Tucson, AZ)

Ive been gone from the truth
Ive hid myself from the fear of knowing you
The things ive done, the places ive been,
How can I be forgiven for all ive done
How can walk when I have been still for so long

Like a fallen leaf , I fall to the ground at your feet
The numbness is easier than truth
Ive seen you in the blue sea
My heart is out there with you
You’ve called me from the distant to come home

I know the way to the truth,
Yet why am I still standing still
I cry ‘come save me’, ‘come save me’
I cry ‘come take me’, ‘come take me’
I say ‘I don’t want to let go’
‘I don’t want to let go’


Ive been fighting this tide
My soul strained from me running away
Ive run to the things I only know
Ive hid my self from the fear
The fear of knowing you

I know the way to the truth,
Yet why am I still standing still
I cry ‘come save me’, ‘come save me’
I cry ‘come take me’, ‘come take me’
I say ‘I don’t want to let go’
‘I don’t want to let go’

im not ready to give up this life ive lived
will the unknown be more than this
then I hear you call me from the distant sea
my time is coming, my eyes take one last glance
now all I see is you