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Come Tomorrow lyrics critique- soft rock song

by Bri
(Richmond B.C.)

~personally, i think the lyrics are kinda cheesy, but let me know what u think!=)~

When nothin' seems to go your way
And it seems like everyone's out to get you
Don't give up and shut yourself away
Just have faith and you'll see that

Come tomorrow, everything'll be ok
Come tomorrow, all your troubles will fade away
Just hold on and you'll see
Tomorrow will be a better day

When it feels like the world is on your shoulders
And everything is crashin' down around you
You gotta just shrug it off and move on
Cause I can promise you

Repeat chorus x2

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Come Tomorrow lyrics critique- soft rock song

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Feb 24, 2009
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by: Anonymous

i think it is very good and insightful i dont think its that cheesy

Mar 07, 2009
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Come Tomorrow Lyrics
by: Anonymous

If you the writer feel the lyrics are cheesy then you must not be satified with the idea.I think you have a good idea.When you re-write the lyrics remember who,what,why,when,where and how.

Why do they feel bad?
How or why will they feel better.

Keep writing and have fun.

Dec 05, 2009
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Realistic...
by: Anonymous

I like some of the word choice because some people do just lock themselves up when things don't go right instead of woring through it and enjoying today and tommorrow. Everyone has an off day, too.. :)

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