come along~ rock alt~lyrics critique~dave graves ~good or blah

by DAVE GRAVES
(laguna,cali. usa)

TAKE MY HAND GUIDE MY PLEASE
TAKE ME SHOW YOUR SHINING FACE
RAISE MY SEEDS BEYOND MY NEEDS
TAKE ME IN YOUR DREAMS

SO MANY SONGS SUNG
SO MANY HOOKS HUNG
FALLING TO YOUR STATE
SO MANY WORDS TO PHRASE

AS THE SKIES TUMBLE IN GREYS
LOVE GUDIDED MAZES TRACE
WALKING MYSPACE YOU CAME
FEELINGS OF THINGS NEVER LEAVE ME IN THE RAINS
LOST BY THE DREAMS I TASTE

SO MANY SONGS SUNG
SO MANY HOOKS HUNG
TENCE TO FALLING STARES
TENDER IN YOUR CARE

YOU LEAD ME TO ANOTHER STATE OF MIND
SO I CAN FINALLY SEE WHATS REAL
ALL THE WORRIES THAT I LAY BESIDE THE WINDOW
SLOWLY START TO BLOW AND FALL AWAY
YOUR WALKING NOW WITH MY SOUL

TENDER IN YOUR CARE
TENDER IN YOUR WAYS