Claire's song lyrics critique- country/soft rock

by Steven
(United states)

Since the day
I first saw u
Girl u looked so damn cute

Ooooohhhh and girl you know
 I never thought it'd go this far
But you stole my heart  
 
Now I'm wide awake
And all I can say is
Baby just to dance with you tonight
Just wanna hold you very tight
Its gonna be the happiest day of my life
When I get to dance with you tonigt

Mmm well now your mine
And bay you look so fine
As I hold in my arms

As that song plays 
Our feet they just sway 
Were falling harder every chord

Now you whisper my name 
An all I can say is 
Baby just to dance with you tonight 
As I hold you oh so tight
This is the happiest day of my life
Ooh girl dancing with you tonight
Just to dance with you

( ooooohhhh just to dance )
Come on come on just dance girl
( ooooohhhh just to dance )
I'm gonna sweep you off your feet
( ooooohhhh just to dance )
Oh girl as we dance to the beat 

Ooooohhhhhh just to 
Ddddddaaaaannnncccceeeeee