Choking Silence - Lyrics Critique

A day like no other when you shine on me
Like the brightest star
You lead me through this life

But now the time is over
You had to go
Using the stairway to heaven

I’m trying to let go
The memories I’ll keep with me
Now my life turns into a choking silence

Looking up to the sky
Till you disappear
I’m standing here
Tears run down my face

Remembering your face
Your beautiful smile
Brightening my day
In the past

It’s getting cold
Inside me
The void is growing
Inside me

I’m trying to let go
The memories I’ll keep with me
Now my life turns into a choking silence

Don’t leave me alone
It’s not fair
It was just to early
So I go my way till the day
We meet again
At a better place
We’ll meet again