Change my heart... change my desires - lyric critique

by Bianca king (16)
(NZ pukekohe)

V1) There are so many things I want.
Not earthly things.
But that which is eternal,
which is heavenly.
These desires may fade away,
or change as time takes its toll.
But I? going to seek you,
fully and whole.
When my heart is steadfast on you,
You won?t hold back from me.
Yes when I lay my life in pursuit of you,
You won?t hold back from me.

C) Father you love making me smile.
You love it when I?m joy?d.
When I desire what you have placed in me,
You will always fill the void.
I don?t understand why you are what you are.
And why I am worthy to call you father.

V2) you have given me so much,
It feels wrong to ask for more.
Yet these things are in my heart,
So how can I ignore?
I?m just going to ask and I?m going to pray.
Believe in faith,
Because you can and will make a way.
I put my hope in you,
When nothing is sure.
Oh in my life,
You?re all that?s sure.

C) Father you love making me smile.
You love it when I?m joy?d.
When I desire what you have placed in me,
You will always fill the void.
I don?t understand why you are what you are.
And why I am worthy to call you father.

B) Father change my heart.
Make my desires right.
Because I only want to please you.
To be holy and acceptable in your sight.
Father change my heart.
Disperse it if it?s cold.
Father take my life.
It?s merely yours to mould

C) Father you love making me smile.
You love it when I?m joy?d.
When I desire what you have placed in me,
You will always fill the void.
I don?t understand why you are what you are.
And why I am worthy to call you father.