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Caitlins Lyrics (looking for support cos im only 11)

by Caitlin
(Hamilton nz)

Crying on the Inside

You help me up
Then push me to the floor
You whisper we are meant to be
But Im no longer sure

So you hold me in your arms
And I tell you 'bout my dreams
You tell me they're a waste
Then try to help me to suceed

Why do you do this to me?

Chorus
You cant see the scars you make
And all the times that you break
My heart you cant see the things that are at stake
And Im crying on the inside
Your tearing me apart
Im dying on the inside
Stop messing with my heart
Yeah

You tell me I look beautiful and I think it will be alright yeah yeah
But you always go and wreck it by yelling at me and eding in a fight, every single night

So i wish youd tell me the truth
And actually give me some proof
Cos Im dying cos of you
Because of you...

Chorus

You hold me close and tell me all I want to hear
But I know in my heart you never shed a tear

Soft chorus

Stop messing with my heart
Yeah...

I dont wanna cry
Over every time you lie
so after all the tears
Im gonna say goodbye

Chorus




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Caitlins Lyrics (looking for support cos im only 11)

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Nov 24, 2009
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Thats awesome
by: Alias

you serious?, your only 11 , you got some real potential , stick wit writing and youll get really good, as for advice, just that you repeat some words a bit "cos, cos, because . in a row, but in some styles thats okay. the beat could use a bit more order too. other than that amazing

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