Bumpy ride (slow pop) - lyrics critique

by jessica
(new york)

only 13 don't trash please


Every open mind
has a closed door waiting behind
is the world ready for you
and are you ready too?
going into the unknown
out of your comfort zone

it may take forever
and they just might say no
life can sure get hard
when you cna't get what you wnat
no matter how hard it is you try
if your mad get mad
if you wnat to cry just cry
it's gonna be a bumpy ride

Living on a prayer might not get you where
it is you want to go
but hold onto your dreams
and maybe someday baby
just keep living life
and keep your hopes alive

it may take forever
and they just might say no
life can sure get hard
when you cna't get what you wnat
no matter how hard it is you try
if your mad get mad
if you wnat to cry just cry
it's gonna be a bumpy ride

They all say try something else
your setting yourself up to fail
but if i wnat it bad enough
i just might prevail
not playing by the rules might get you dsiqualified but it doesn't mean you loose

it may take forever
and they just might say no
life can sure get hard
when you cna't get what you wnat
no matter how hard it is you try
if your mad get mad
if you wnat to cry just cry
it's gonna be a bumpy ride

life throws you problem
and you'll learn to dodge them
when life put up walls you tear them down
when theres something in your way you wlak around

it may take forever
and they just might say no
life can sure get hard
when you cna't get what you wnat
no matter how hard it is you try
if your mad get mad
if you wnat to cry just cry
it's gonna be a bumpy ride