Broken Strings Critique - Country Song

by Demitria

I couldn't really decide what the genre would be but the simplest way for me to explain it is slow with a beat.


Broken Strings


Verse 1

I feel alone on the Saturday nights
My friends are all out
But i'm stuck inside...

My gui-tar's no use
It's just a filthy excuse
To try and get away from you...
Oh


Chorus

I can't even get this stupid song right
Worked on it so long, maybe all night
But I got my mind set on something else

I don't remember all of the notes
You're on my mind I just can't let you go
Don't you understand the secret's hard to keep
Cause my broken strings tell the whole story...

(Pause for like a few seconds)


I take deep breathe's in the moonlit sky
I bet you already forgot me
Yeah, our love was a lie

My gui-tar can't take in
All the pain I'm feeling
For the simple reason you never listen...
Oh yeah

You don't know...

I can't even get this stupid song right
Worked on it so long, maybe all night
But I got my mind set on something else

I don't remember all of the notes
You're on my mind I just can't let you go
Don't you understand the secret's hard to keep
Cause my broken strings tell the whole story...

My life is reckless
Drivng testess
Heart regreting
Heels on begging
You say you're sorry
I joined that party before so no
(Pause momentarily)

No, no, no

Not gonna happen again
Not gonna happen again
I won't let it happen again...
Oh, oh


I can't even get this stupid song right
Worked on it so long, maybe all night
But I got my mind set on something else

I don't remember all of the notes
You're on my mind I just can't let you go
Don't you understand the secret's hard to keep
Cause my broken strings tell the whole...

Story...
Yeah
Oh, oh
La la la la la
Uh huh
Woah, woah, woah...