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broken past lyrics critique-rock

i havent came up with any bridge or second verse

i can still hear your voice in all of your notes.
like your right there telling me exactly what you wrote.
its not my fault you left.as im left in shame.
we'll both go as equals but we'll never be the same.

i sleep on your side while my side is empty
id be heart broken if i had one still in me
the morinigs are hard and the night full of pain
i truely have lost what wasnt mine gain

chorus

so lay down your guns.the war is over my wounds are sowed up
we had our run.we really showed em but the past is broken....my past is broke




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by: Kristyn

I really liked it. I don't usually like rock songs, but i like this one... it was beautifully written.... :) i really liked it.. and i think a lot of people can relate. Keep writing...

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