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Broken heart for free (Guitar,drums,keyboard. It's kinda fast)

by Victoria
(Drammen,Norway)

Well, it's often girls who do "everything" for there boyfriends,and stuff like that.
My sister was like that,so i got inspiration from that. The boy broke up because she wasn't "good enough". Her other friends didn't want to talk to her since she was always ignoring them and stuff like that..

I am not finished,but this is the chorus







Chorus:
"I don't wanna know what you have done to me
And i don't wanna know either if were meant to be
You blended my eyes so i couldn't see
pay the prize of loosing it all
get a broken heart for free

I don't wanna know what i was on
I only know is that it's better when your gone
And what i learned has to be
pay the prize of losing it all
Get a broken heart for free"


I'm only 13,so i'm not good! But i am REALLY trying to get better!




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Sep 01, 2010
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by: Anonymous

Your thirteen? You are a good songwriter to only be thirteen!

Many girls(and boys) can relate to this, i like it a lot!

Oct 07, 2010
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K.I.S.S. (Keep It Simple Stupid) I think thats what that means?
by: Rob

It works Dude.... the problem I have is I over think the lyrics.... Just keep it simple.. It will get better & better.. Lennon & McCartney
(The Beatles if you didn't know? you're only 13)
They were 1 of the all time greatest song writing duo in the biz. They didn't start out on top.. A lot of free writing... It doesn't have to make sense at 1st, But stick with it & it will make sense... Like anything else you'll do, PRACTICE,PRACTICE,PRACTICE,PRACTICE... Then PRACTICE 1000x more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Luck Kid!!

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