Broken Apart Lyrics Critique - Rock Song

by Cavin
(Rome Ga)

Broken Apart

Eyes open i see clearly now
no longer on this cloud
you fall crashing to the ground
landing somewhere far away
with no one else around

This lonely road you walk alone
a thousand miles away from home
growing weary by the day
your strength slowly fades away

Comfort here you never found
once again knocked to the ground
staring into an open crowd
without a friend to be found

Now you lay here motionless
these falling tears do attest
to your broken heart and helplessness
enemies closing in all around
no one to lift you from the ground

Laying here your soul still burns
finding nowhere else to turn
dying your heart now yearns
for those words once heard

But they're not coming tonight
losing that feeling inside
this doesn't feel alright
your hurt your pain
for me its all the same
and you're the one to blame