Bring it -- lyrics critique :)

by Kelsey :)
(Wisconsin :))

i just wrote this song like 5 minutes ago.. its suppose to be like a hip-hop dance/beat.. so here it is. :]]

Bring it

Walk in the club
Everybody step aside
Hey look over here
The party has arrived

Boys get your girls
And girls get your boys
We’re gonna dance
So let’s hear some noise

Hit the dance floor
Like you mean it
Drop it down and
Show-them-what-we-got
Bring it back up
Like we always do
Get out there; get out-there-and dance

(Then he whispered in my ear)
Hey that girl over there is challenging you
Let’s go show her how we do;
How we do

Boys get your girls
And girls get your boys
We’re gonna dance
So let’s hear some noise

Hit the dance floor
Like you mean it
Drop it down and
Show-them-what-we-got
Bring it back up
Like we always do
Get out there; get out-there-and dance

And it went a little something like this
(Interlude--dancingg!!)!


Hit the dance floor –
Like you mean it –
[Drop it down and show-them-what-we-got]

Hit the dance floor
Like you mean it
Drop it down and
Show-them-what-we-got
Bring it back up
Like we always do
Get out there; get out-there-and dance

Boys get your girls
And girls get your boys
We’re gonna dance
So let’s hear some noise