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Bitter Pill - Lyrics Critique - Acoustic Song

by Michelle

They say a good beginning makes for a good ending
So how could I know that you'd become condescending?
And just as cold as those days in January
The days when I started to become so weary
The day when I finally walked out the door
When I decided that I won't take anymore

And it's such a bitter pill to swallow
Knowing that when I wake up tomorrow
I won't get to see your face
You're gone like a criminal in a high speed chase

Now my world's upside down and cold and dark and black
You have stolen my heart and I will get it back
I don't know how you got away with this crime
But I can promise you it won't happen another time
Like I can promise you that the sun will rise
Like I can promise you that the stars will shine

And it's such a bitter pill to swallow
Knowing that when I wake up tomorrow
I won't get to see your face
You're gone like a criminal in a high speed chase

Oh oh I caught up to you
Did you think you could out run me oooo
Now I'm taking my heart with me
Oh oh why don't you see?

That it's such a bitter pill to swallow
Knowing that when I wake up tomorrow
I won't get to see your face
Cause I'm gone like a criminal in a high speed chase

I hope it's such a bitter pill to swallow
Knowing that when you wake up tomorrow
My memory of you will be forever erased
Cause I'm gone like a criminal in a high speed chase
Cause I'm gone like a criminal in a high speed chase

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