[?] Subscribe To This Site

XML RSS
Add to Google
Add to My Yahoo!
Add to My MSN
Subscribe with Bloglines

Home
Blog
How To Write Song
Question of Week
Songwriting Tips
Writing Lyrics
Songwriting
Building a Studio
Recommendations
SW Software
Songwriting Books
Discussion Forums
Lyrics Critique
Best Songwriters
Writing Songs
Studio Equipment
Music Software
Record Deals
Music Marketing
Music Business
Publishing
Build Your Website
Recording Studios
Free Newsletter
Who Wrote Song
About This Site
Contact
Privacy Policy

Better Times Rock with a reggae vibe - lyric critique

I actually didn't write these lyrics, I work closely with my bass player who writes all the lyrics for our band. I wanted to get an unbiased opinion.

Verse 1:

Tell you of a time ago,
When there was no fighting
There was nowhere to run
We never needed to hide

Tell you of a time ago,
When things were much easier
Your sense for one and other
never bothered your pride

Chorus:

So show me that direction cause I know it's coming fast
Say what you want to now it's all in the past
I may have lost a step girl, but at least I still got soul
I'm too strong for a ballad babe, but too down for rock and roll.

Verse 2:

Streets are like memories
laughter was everywhere
too bad it's all gone now
babe I wish we were there

Show you that time ago,
but never tell you how
it wasn't always the good times
but damn sure better than now

Chorus

Repeat verse 1

Chorus

End.

Any feedback would be appreciated. I don't write lyrics much, though I try, just don't seem to have much success.




Comments for
Better Times Rock with a reggae vibe - lyric critique

Average Rating starstarstarstarstar

Click here to add your own comments

Nov 05, 2008
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
:)
by: Sweetie

Good.

Dec 23, 2008
Rating
starstarstarstarstar
really liked
by: d olsen

i really liked the chorus nice song

Click here to add your own comments





Search This Site:

Custom Search

Recommended For You

Songwriting Software:

Songwriting software can help you take your songwriting to a new level. Become a master songwriter. Read my reviews of the best songwriting software.

Learn about MasterWriter and Lyricist.

How to write a song:

Professional Songwriting Secrets

Learn how to write a song here.

creative songwriting course

Get video instructions on how to write hit songs here!

Favorite Songwriter (Musician) Products and Stores:

Check out our best songwriter/musician product recommendations.

Musical Instruments:

Click here to shop for musical instruments.

Get Your Free Ezine. Enter your E-mail Address

Enter your First Name (optional)

Then

Don't worry -- your e-mail address is totally secure.
I promise to use it only to send you Ultimate Songwriting Xpress!.


Forums:

Join the discussions in our songwriter's forums.

Ultimate Songwriting is on Facebook. Click the like button below and join us on Facebook.

UltimateSongwriting.com on Twitter

Follow UltimateSongwriting.com on Twitter.