Best Friends Lyrics Critique- Acoustic

Hi! I'm Hannah and 13 years old. I started this song when I got the news that my best friend since kindergarden would be attending a private school from 8-12 grade. I was devastated. So, like I normally do, I put all of those raw feelings into lyrics. Don't be afraid to tell me they stink! Thank you!


We were just two little girls
On the first day of kindergarden
We're both nervous, we both needed someone to lean on

ALl dressed in a Barbie bookbag
And a little pink dress you apporoached me
Said do you want to be friends
Little did I know...

CHORUS 1
We'd be having playdates
With Mommy's makup on our face
Sharing our dolls and our secrets, too
Two little girls suddently became best friends
We became best friends

END

So my plan is to take the next verse as us going to Jr. High for the first time, then high school, then the bridge being us being separeted to go to college. What do you think?