Beautiful People Lyrics Critique- R&B/Pop

by Nia
(Trinidad)

Once upon a time you made me fall in love with you
and I know, you really loved me too
I really cherished
Our precious moments
So just imagine all the hurt and the pain pain
And all the tears how they flowed, and the loss of weight weight

Chorus: Beautiful people come once in a lifetime
And they stay until everything's alright
then they go and leave your world very peaceful
It's when you realise they were angels

Only once upon a time would I meet someone like you
One time to get to know you
You made me laugh
And was never sad
So just picture the shock to my brain brain
How I wanted to scream chocked couldn't say that

Once upon a time, I met someone like you
Only once, does that happen
How do I live?
What could I do?
Cause I see no point to my life life
Why should I live but you had to die die