beautiful lyrics critique - rock

by bode okedayo
(kaduna, nigeria)

some words unspoken
some things left undone
some feelings unexpressed
but you're so graceful
that i must say so

your eyes are hopeful
full of silent songs
angels love you
and they wish to
have your beautiful looks

chorus
Jesus you are so nice
Jesus you are so cool
Jesus you are so
beautiful to look opon

from the mountain top
i saw the universe
among the pretty ones
there's none like you

sound of music floats
sweetest melody notes
something is missing
if you are not in control

bridge
no one else
can sing to make me dance until i fly
no one else
can shine so much to outshine the moon and stars
you're the one
who can afford to make me feel so shy
i'm falling for you 'cos you are beautiful