Be Mine - Lyrics Critique

by Nathan Rogers
(New Zealand, Auckland, Mangere Bridge)

(VERSE 1)

I WAS IN THE MALL CHILLIN AFTER SCHOOL
LOOKING ROUND FOR GIRLS SO I COULD MAKE A MOVE
AND THEN I SAW THIS CHICK
SO I MOVED REAL QUICK
BUT I FOUND SHE WAS…………… HITCHED
IT DIDN’T REALLY MATTER ANYWAY
I KNOW IMA GET HER EITHERWAY
AND I WANTED TO HOLLA
BUT THEN AGAIN WHY BOTHER
BECAUSE SHE LOOKS 22……………

(CHORUS):

HAY I SHOULDVE MOVED TO HER
I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO PROVE TO HER
BUT MAYBE SHE WOULDVE LIKED IF I TALKED TO HER RIGHT
SO I MOVED AND THIS IS HOW I DO IT…………

CAN I TALK TO YOU MAMA (HAE)
YALL LOOK SO FINE (YALL LOOK SO FINE)
AND I WAS THINKING ACTUALLY HOPEING YOU’DE BE MINE
I KNOW WHAT YOURE THINKING
WOW AND WHO AM I…………..
SO WHATS YOUR NUMBER MAMII AND ILL GIVE YOU MINE

(VERSE 2):

THINKING HOW TO FIND HER BY HERSELF
BOYS ALWAYS TRYING TO BE SOMEBODYELSE
BUT EVERYTIME I SAW HER
BOYS WERE ALL UP ON HER


BUT SHE WAS BUSY CHECKING FOR THE SALES
THE MIND IN ME IS LIKE JUST LEAVE THE GIRL
BUT THE HEART IN ME WAS LIKE MAN SHES YOURE WORLD

BUT I MAY NEVER FIND THIS MINT CHICK EVER AGAIN… I GOTTA MAN UP AND TELL HER SO




(CHORUS):

HAY I SHOULDVE MOVED TO HER
I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO PROVE TO HER
BUT MAYBE SHE WOULDVE LIKED IF I TALKED TO HER RIGHT
SO I MOVED AND THIS IS HOW I DO IT…………

CAN I TALK TO YOU MAMA (HAE)
YALL LOOK SO FINE (YALL LOOK SO FINE)
AND I WAS THINKING ACTUALLY HOPEING YOU’DE BE MINE
I KNOW WHAT YOURE THINKING
WOW AND WHO AM I…………..
SO WHATS YOUR NUMBER MAMII AND ILL GIVE YOU MINE

(VERSE 3):
(BREAKDOWN):

BABE LIFE WITHOUT YOU’S POINTLESS
IVE BEEN LIVIN IN THIS COLD WORLD
NOW THAT IM FULLY GROWN (I SEE)
I SEE LOVE IS DESTINED IN MY LIFE
COZ I JUST COULDN’T LIVE WITHOUT YOU
NO DISRESPECT TO YOUR MAN BUT I GOTTA HAVE YOU BABY!!!!!!!!!!!


(BREAK AWAY):
(CHORUS)

CAN I TALK TO YOU MAMA (HAE)
YALL LOOK SO FINE (YALL LOOK SO FINE GIRL!)
AND I WAS THINKING ACTUALLY HOPEING YOU’DE BE MINE (YEAH!)
I KNOW WHAT YOURE THINKING
WOW AND WHO AM I…………..(IM WHATCHA NEED IN YALL LIFE!)
SO WHATS YOUR NUMBER MAMII AND ILL GIVE YOU MINE (MINE………..!)


CAN I TALK TO YOU MAMA (HAE)
YALL LOOK SO FINE (YALL KNOW IM RIGHT)
AND I WAS THINKING ACTUALLY HOPEING YOU’DE BE MINE
I KNOW WHAT YOURE THINKING
WOW AND WHO AM I…………..(ILL BE THAT GUY IN YALL LIFE)
SO WHATS YOUR NUMBER MAMII AND ILL GIVE YOU MINE


AYEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!………………………….

(END)