Battle of Love lyrics Critique- R&B

by Lauren Laine
(Pennsylvania)

Here is me, Here is you smiling in the photograph
I just cry and feel pain as I go on thinking back
back to the time when we were one
but the photo is just broken glass

chorus
what is this that you take me for
lookin at the glass on my floor
who do you even think you are
runnin round this town just breakin hearts

That smile those brown eyes boy you're such an actor
you paint a smile on your face
but at night it turns to laughter
oh oh
you think you've won but the battles just begun

chorus
what is this that you take me for
lookin at the glass on my floor
who do you even think you are
runnin round this town just breakin hearts
oh oh oh

Yes its true that you have captured me before
but that was then and now I've closed that door
the bridge has been burnt
cause I can't take it no more
the pain you caused is killin' me

chorus
what is this that you take me for
lookin at the glass on my floor
who do you even think you are
runnin round this town just breakin hearts

ooooooooh oh oh