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Battle me 4 part 2 by James Cook - lyrics critique

by James Cook
(Viet Nam)

The hustlers Dream, Battle me 4 scheem too make the cream, Pockets full of green when I walk I lean in Gucci Jeans ya shorty need to play for my team....
Battle me 4
The will too steal and kill Yo Hommie ya better chill Philly catz be keeping it real, Ya catz just wanna record deal scared to pack the Blue steal,Hustling day an night 4 Mill...
Battle me 4
Platium chain the roley an the ice out Blang Blang Battle me 4
the game the fame and all Chicken head dames....Pimp
like me will never change 22's looking too cool
making Ya cats look like fools I gota school ya youngsters to rules , I'm Don ya catz fall like pon's
checkmate ya catz just bate waiting 4 your fate tied
up and duck tape getting raped by apes, Getting took by old school crook ya shook I know these streets like a open book, I got the game hook
Battle me 4 Crown Cuz I hold these Ghetto streets down,
around my town ya be clown, North Philly catz put ya 6 feet under jack,No RAP, take over ( beanie stack )then throw away mack,clean off the tack
and be right back,Kid nap ya Uncle Jack 4 blink check
I get much respect GOD Bless!!

(part2 )F--- jada kisses take all chips throw body in the sinking ship say dye dye 2 miss kiss feed the Punk ass to the fishes, no more wishes
Come ur ya spot clean off all dishes Philly catz tier of all ya Bitches,
Battle me 4
two door drop top 4 door exploer where they drop PAC left his is Body in aBanding lot,Jada snitching to Cop's scared
to do real D-Block ya need (cracker) to make ya Album hot N---- Battle me 4 Top Take all ya NY spots
ya DaF Jam chain an avenue watch havin Dame calling my Name saying kiss lame !! ya better call J Ho cuz about too reload
live ya body cold with lonely ashes to the hold moma crying over baby lose soul i be the reason why ya
Album went GOLD !! battle me 4


James Cook jaycook2001@hotmail.com




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Battle me 4 part 2 by James Cook - lyrics critique

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Jun 28, 2011
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The lyrics sounds Cool!!
by: Anonymous

IS this song battle song against JZ / Jade Kiss
and DAF JAM Records Why you want to Battle them for? 5 stars!!

Jul 07, 2011
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OFF the chain Man
by: Anonymous

The lyrics tight battle rap !!!

Jul 08, 2011
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I like the flow
by: Anonymous

I like the flow !!

Jan 25, 2012
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very good rap song
by: Anonymous

This rap song could be for a battle rapper like
Beanie Sigel or Young Gunz all cuz it's about
streetz life in philly i think philly rappers would like this song

Jan 26, 2012
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Don't give up!!
by: Jabar Hakeem

I like the urban street poems and rapers this could be a hit song with the right rapper.

Jan 27, 2012
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Anthony wayne
by: Anonymous

Hi James,
Working with talent on Inner City Girl. May have
to start a BMI publishing company to offer you publishing. It might take a minute to accomplish this.
As I have to get name approval and so forth.


Be advised that getting a song on the radio costs a lot of money (Payola). We dont call it that anymore but same concept.
Thats why there is always major label money behind songs on the radio.


Radio airplay is what BMI and ASCAP pay for. Airplay for your song has a better chance through internet radio.
BMI and ASCAP dont pay as much for these. When I publish a song I look for film and TV placements.
So dont be disappointed if we dont make a whole lot of money real fast.


You can put together a collection of songs that you have written lyrics for and had produced. Like Quincy Jones, he dosent play on the album but hires all the talent and produces the project. A compilation project can be distributed via itunes and the like.


Meanwhile here is Garden of Eve. This one took a lot of work as the guitar was out of tune and the performance not so tight.
Hope you like.
Tony

Feb 04, 2012
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meal ticket by james cook
by: Anonymous

EDited MEAL TICKET BY JAMES COOK
by james cook
(vietnam)

Meal ticket by james cook


(Hook)There's a meal ticket

to the other side.
there's a free pass

that can change our lives

(Lyrics)

That can make everything alright,

bring our hood dreams to life, without

hitting numbers or slang da white,

Hugging the corners until ya get your paper right.
The luck of the draw, the role of Dice, A thug's pain, a hustlers gain to maintain
,A baller's iceout chain,OG's Name Rocking a Pimp Daddy Cain( the hood life will leave you insaine.))(


Chorus for meal ticket...


You ready? Where we goin? Don't ask questions you riding wit ya meal ticket, meal ticket


I wanna know if u ready baby, Togo steady baby, take trips to the other side let's get married baby.
I'm your meal ticket, to get up out this hood, I'm ya meal ticket, to make ya body feel good, ya meal ticket,
offer so good you can't say no. Ya meal ticket, pack up ya bags and let's go


Hook)


Hook)There's a meal ticket

to the other side.
there's a free pass

that can change our lives

Every move there is price, The streetz make ya lose ya sight, No way to by pass this liFe,
every breath is a fight, trying get ya mind right, it's to dark too
see the light. the smoke from smoker pipe.The fem's that moves
through the night,The gun with all it's might,has the power to choose
Death or life, between Heaven & hell Bars with out cell. No way to
make Bail, No deals or appeals,Just the real, a life on Hamburger hill. lost
souls on a battle field with the will to kill.

(Hook)

There's a meal ticket
to the other side
theres a free pass
that
can change our live's



Chorus for meal ticket...


You ready? Where we goin? Don't ask questions you riding wit ya meal ticket, meal ticket


I wanna know if u ready baby, Togo steady baby, take trips to the other side let's get married baby.
I'm your meal ticket, to get up out this hood, I'm ya meal ticket, to make ya body feel good, ya meal ticket,
offer so good you can't say no. Ya meal ticket, pack up ya bags and let's go


(Lyrics)


(SHORTY) No more soup lines, No more bagging the Man for Nickels and Dimes,

No more committing illegal crimes just Knowledge to feed the mind.

No more section 8's No more rent being late. No more tears running down your face,

No more Birthday's with out the cake. No more roaches running around ya place.

no more winters with chills and shakes. No more Death and Yellow tape. Looking

up to heavens for Faith!!

(Hook)


There's a Meal Ticket That can change our lives,

There's a free pass to the other side,


There's a meal ticket That can change our lives

There's a free pass to the other side.














james cook jaycook2001@hotmail.com



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